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B.E.S.T. Writing Rubric — Expository, Grades 7-10

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The FL B.E.S.T. Writing Rubric — Expository, Grades 7-10 scored out of 12 points across 3 criteria, for expository writing at grades 7-10. Published by Florida Department of Education (FLDOE), Office of Assessment.

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  • Purpose/Structure4 pts · 4 levels
  • Development4 pts · 4 levels
  • Language4 pts · 4 levels

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Purpose/Structure · 4 points

4 points

Central idea is focused on the task and consistently maintained throughout, with organizational structure that strengthens the response. Transitions are purposeful; introduction and conclusion are effective and enhance the essay.

3 points

Central idea is focused on the task and generally maintained throughout, with logical organization. Transitions connect ideas purposefully; introduction and conclusion are sufficient and contribute to a sense of completeness.

2 points

Central idea may be unclear, loosely related, or insufficiently sustained. Organization may be repetitive or inconsistent. Transitions attempt to connect ideas but may lack purpose and/or variety. Introduction/conclusion may be present but repetitive, simplistic, or otherwise ineffective.

1 point

Central idea may be absent, ambiguous, or confusing. Little or no discernible organizational structure. Transitions may be absent or confusing. Response may be too brief to demonstrate task awareness.

Development · 4 points

4 points

Skillful development demonstrates thorough understanding of the topic. Elaboration includes original student writing combined with paraphrasing, text evidence, examples, definitions, narrative, and/or rhetorical techniques. Evidence is smoothly integrated from multiple sources and appropriately cited.

3 points

Logical development demonstrates understanding of the topic. Elaboration combines original student writing with paraphrasing, text evidence, examples, definitions, narrative, and/or rhetorical techniques. Evidence is relevant, integrated, and appropriately cited.

2 points

Development may demonstrate partial or incomplete understanding. Elaboration may attempt to develop the central idea but may rely heavily on sources, or be loosely related, repetitive, or otherwise ineffective. Evidence may be partially integrated and lacks appropriate citations.

1 point

Response may demonstrate lack of understanding, with confusing ideas. Evidence may be absent, vague, and/or confusing, and lacks appropriate citations. Response may be too brief to demonstrate knowledge.

Language · 4 points

4 points

Integration of academic vocabulary strengthens and furthers ideas. Skillful use of varied sentence structure contributes to fluidity. Grammar, punctuation, capitalization, and spelling demonstrate consistent command. Tone/voice strengthens the overall response.

3 points

Integration of academic vocabulary demonstrates clear expression of ideas. Sentence structure is varied and shows grade-appropriate language facility. Grammar/conventions demonstrate grade-appropriate command of standard English. Tone/voice is appropriate for the overall response.

2 points

Vocabulary may be imprecise or basic. Sentence structure may be partially controlled, somewhat simplistic. Inconsistent use of conventions may contain multiple distracting errors. Tone/voice may be inconsistent.

1 point

Vocabulary may be vague, unclear, or confusing. Sentence structure may be simplistic or confusing. Errors demonstrate lack of command of standard English conventions, often obscuring meaning. Tone/voice may be inappropriate.

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The prompt

Write an essay explaining how social media has changed the way people receive and share news. Use specific examples to develop your explanation.

Fifty years ago, most people learned what had happened in the world at a fixed time from a small number of sources: a morning paper, or a broadcast at six o'clock. Social media has dismantled that arrangement.1 News now arrives continuously, it reaches people through the same feed as everything else in their lives2, and an algorithm decides which of it they see.

The first and most obvious change is speed. A person standing on the street with a phone can publish a photograph of an event before any reporter arrives, and that photograph can travel to millions of people within an hour. This has real value: it has documented disasters and abuses that would once have gone unrecorded3. But speed and verification pull against each other. A newsroom that once had hours to confirm a claim before publishing now competes with an account that has no verification process at all, and a correction issued the next morning never reaches the same audience the original reached4.

News is also different now because of algorithms. People see different things.5 Everyone has a phone these days and phones have gotten much better cameras over the past ten years.6

People also react to news faster than they used to. They can comment right away.7

What has changed, then, is not simply the delivery method, the old shared foundation of a single agreed set of facts has largely dissolved8.

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How it scored, criterion by criterion

Purpose/Structure2 / 4

The essay opens with a clear, focused central idea about how social media has changed news consumption, and the first body paragraph is logically organized with relevant support. However, the organizational structure breaks down significantly in the middle: the paragraph beginning 'News is also different now because of algorithms' loses direction mid-thought and pivots to a completely unrelated sentence about phone cameras, and the next paragraph ('People also react to news faster') is little more than two undeveloped sentences. The conclusion is a single sentence that attempts closure but does not meaningfully synthesize the essay's ideas, leaving the overall structure inconsistent.

Development2 / 4

The first body paragraph demonstrates genuine understanding of the topic and develops the speed-versus-verification tension with a concrete, well-reasoned example. After that, development collapses: the algorithm paragraph introduces an idea but abandons it entirely, the sentence about phone cameras is wholly irrelevant, and the paragraph about reader reactions offers no elaboration whatsoever. No specific examples are provided beyond the first paragraph, and no sources are cited anywhere in the essay, as the rubric requires. The development is uneven and incomplete overall.

Language3 / 4

Where the essay is substantive — particularly the introduction and first body paragraph — the language is genuinely strong: vocabulary is precise ('verification,' 'dismantled,' 'algorithm'), sentence structure is varied and controlled, and the analytical tone is consistent and appropriate to expository writing. A comma splice appears in the second sentence ('News now arrives continuously, it reaches people...'), and the abrupt shift to very short, simple sentences in the later paragraphs ('They can comment right away') drags the overall language quality down from a 4 to a solid 3. Conventions are otherwise well handled.

What the student was told to fix

  • Fully develop the algorithms paragraph: explain specifically what algorithmic filtering does to news consumption and give a concrete example
  • Cut the irrelevant camera sentence and replace it with evidence that connects directly to the prompt
  • Expand the reaction paragraph into a full, developed body paragraph with specific reasoning or examples
  • Write a real conclusion that briefly revisits each main point before landing on the closing insight about shared facts dissolving

Graded on 2026-08-09. A teacher can change any score before it goes back to the student.

Source

Florida Department of Education (FLDOE), Office of Assessment. Official document. Rubrics are revised periodically, so check the source before using this for a graded assessment.

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